I bet you can guess why I'm here. I found this while browsing dA:
[link] and it made me want to read your story.
I want to personally say your story is really written well like a professional has written it, like the flow of the story from drama to suspense, and it's keeping me on the edge of my seat...
... and I'm only on chapter 5 LOL! Great job, This is suspenseful and exciting like "The Da Vinci Code" (except your chapters are more than two pages long LOL)
Keep writing (assuming it's not done yet) again, big fan ^_^ and here, take a llama.